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What 1 Movie & 2 Short Stories Taught Me About Writing

By Kathy · Comments (0)
Wednesday, June 5th, 2013

What We Talk About When We Talk About Love – stories by Raymond Carver After I saw the Australian movie Jindabyne recently, I decided to read the Raymond Carver short story on which the movie is based. It was fascinating to see how Beatrix Christian adapted the short, spare text of “So Much Water So Close to Home” to create a compelling 2-hour movie.

So often when we see movie adaptations of novels, we lament what’s been lost, even when it’s obvious something must be sacrificed when going from 500 pages of text to 90 minutes of film. Beatrix Christian’s task obviously was more of a fleshing out of what Raymond Carver left unsaid, between the lines, in his story. A talented pair of writers, both of them.

Having completed the one story, I had to read the rest of the collection, What We Talk About When We Talk About Love. One story in particular blew me away with what Raymond Carver, again, with his tight, tight writing, left unsaid.

The story “The Third Thing That Killed My Father Off” begins:

I’ll tell you what did my father in. The third thing was Dummy, that Dummy died. The first thing was Pearl Harbour. And the second thing was moving to my father’s farm near Wenatchee.

We then get the thing about Dummy, but no more is said about the move or Pearl Harbour until the last paragraph:

But as I said, Pearl Harbour and having to move back to his dad’s place didn’t do my dad one bit of good, either.

Is it possible to read those lines and not wonder what it was about Pearl Harbour and about that move that did that narrator’s father in? Arriving at the end of “The Third Thing…”, I was reminded of one of my favourite writing quotes (which I used in an earlier post – “The Joy of Cutting Words”):

The last thing that a poet learns is how to throw away,
And how to make you thrill and creep with what he doesn’t say.
– J.R. Lowell

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Categories : Writing
Tags : Beatrix Christian, Raymond Carver

Whose Point of View?

By Kathy · Comments (0)
Wednesday, May 22nd, 2013

A writer has many things to think about, including which character’s viewpoints are needed to tell a particular story. Like many writers, I’m drawn to stories told from multiple points of view. I think this is because, as writers, we’re fascinated with the different ways people perceive and experience the world, and how that influences their behaviour. We may also be keen to see events from all sides. But which of many possible viewpoints are needed to tell a particular story is a question all writers must inevitably face.

At one point in the writing of What Happened to Ivy, I’d written scenes from the points of view of a number of key people: Ivy, an eleven year old girl with multiple disabilities; David, her teenage brother; their father, Stephen; and David’s friend, Hannah.

First to go as I continued working on the manuscript was Stephen. He’s still in the novel, of course. There would not be a story without the role he plays in it. I may have needed to be in his head for a while myself to help me figure out just what his role was and how he felt about it, but, I decided, readers did not need to go there.

The next point of view to go was Hannah’s, even though for some time I thought What Happened to Ivy was her story. I won’t go into why, but it made sense to me at the time. Her pov was harder for me to let go of than Stephen’s.

Hardest of all to let go of was Ivy’s point of view. I loved Ivy and I loved how trying to imagine myself into her life helped me get to know her. But again readers didn’t need to go inside her head. Not only did they not need to, but as was the case with Stephen,  being inside her head would have undermined reader identification with David. Better for readers to experience the events of that important summer in David’s life strictly as he would have experienced them.

That said, I’d like to offer up one of Ivy’s scenes which, whether you’ve read What Happened to Ivy yet or not, won’t spoil anything for you.

Ivy can’t move. Daddy is holding her too tight.

   Mommy comes closer. She says the medicine tastes like cherries. It doesn’t.

   Ivy keeps her mouth closed. She kicks. She tries to roll over like Shamus. But Daddy says, “Damn it, Ivy,” and holds her tighter.

   Daddy is strong. It hurts when he holds her tight. It hurts her back and it hurts her arms and it hurts her head and she has to cry. And when she does, Mommy sticks the medicine in the back of her mouth. It smells like David’s armpits before his shower and it tastes like garbage and metal. Ivy wants to spit it out, but she can’t.

“All done,” Daddy says. He puts her in her wheelchair. He pushes her to the window.

Outside is green. The birds are brown. The red birds are all gone. But there are red flowers. Big red flowers that look like Mommy’s smile when she wears lipstick. And tall blue flowers. And yellow flowers that look like the sun in one of her books. And teeny tiny little blue flowers. under all the big flowers and in other parts of the garden too.

David is in the garden on his knees. He looks up.

Ivy waves. Her back hurts. So does her neck. And so does her head.

David waves back.

Hannah comes across the street. She waves to Ivy in the window too. Ivy waves back.

David and Hannah talk.

Hannah waves bye-bye. Bye-bye is not like hi.

David calls, “Hannah, wait!”

Hannah comes back. David hands her a bunch of the teeny tiny little blue flowers. David likes Hannah.

When Hannah is gone, David looks up at Ivy’s window. He waves.

Ivy waves back. Her head hurts. So does her neck. And so does her back.

Haven’t read What Happened to Ivy yet? It was named a CLA Honour Book this spring so maybe you should!

Image courtesy of Master isolated images / FreeDigitalPhotos.net

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Categories : Kathy Stinson Books, Writing
Tags : point of view characters, What Happened to Ivy

Stuff bloggers have said about Me

By Kathy · Comments (2)
Wednesday, April 24th, 2013

“Kathy Blogged” has disappeared from the Author menu on my website. Those words never quite captured what they were trying to say: Here are some blogs where Kathy Stinson is mentioned. But rather than just see some of the neat things bloggers said totally disappear, I decided to put a few of them into a blog of my own.

Jan L. Coates

Here’s Jan Coates, author of The Hare in the Elephant’s Trunk, blogging about “Killing off your darlings”. (The writer in the photo, taken by Erin Thomas, is also Jan.)

Here’s Erin Thomas, author of Haze, blogging about “Ten Honest Things” in which she mentions a few blogs she likes (including mine; I like hers too).

Here’s a blog my sister wrote when I first went to Liberia to work with writers there. I include it here in hopes of inspiring interest in Laptops for Liberia. My sister is also my Organized Assistant. It was her idea to put these blog mentions together here.

Tudor Robins, whose first book Objects In Mirror will be out soon, mentioned me in her next-to-last post of 2012.

This last one is not exactly a blog but I couldn’t resist tucking it in here. It’s a 5-minute audio podcast that Annick Press produced, during which I chat about Red is Best and a grade one boy in Lethbridge, Alberta, my grandson and A Pocket Can Have A Treasure In It, and how reading helped turn me into a writer.

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Categories : Kathy Stinson Books, Liberia, Writing
Tags : Erin Thomas, Jan Coates, Janet Barclay, Red Is Best, Tudor Robins

Photo of the Month #11

By Kathy · Comments (0)
Wednesday, April 10th, 2013

I wasn’t crazy about writing when I was a kid, but I did like it when the teacher gave us a picture as a starting point, especially if the picture inspired questions. Who? What? Where? And the best one: Why?

What would I have written if she’d given us this photo (which she couldn’t have because I shot it just this weekend)?

shoes in the woods

What’s the story here? What do YOU think?

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Categories : Photography, Writing
Tags : inspiration, photos

Thank You, Terry Fallis!

By Kathy · Comments (6)
Wednesday, March 27th, 2013

Amprosia While waiting for editorial feedback on What Happened to Ivy last winter, I started work on some short stories, thinking they might be less overwhelming – more easily broken into smaller chunks of work – than another novel would be, even if I was aiming to have enough stories, eventually, for a collection. Of course when I decided the stories would all be linked in some way beyond their theme, but each story would also stand well on its own, things got a bit complicated, as complicated as they do when writing a novel, maybe moreso.

As I’ve worked on this project, I’ve invited feedback from writer-friends, to see how well some of the individual stories are working (or not) as stand-alone stories. I’ve also been submitting a few finished pieces to contests.

Early this winter The Writers’ Community of Durham Region informed me that my entry in their contest (Amprosia) was one of nine stories that would go on to the final round of judging. Those nine stories would be judged by Terry Fallis, author of Best Laid Plans and others. ‘Great,’ I thought. ‘Maybe there is actually a point to the work I’m doing here.’

The day the winners were to be announced, those attending WCDR’s monthly meeting heard that Terry Fallis had this to say of the finalists’ stories:

‘They were all crafted by very talented writers who know how to sculpt sentences and assemble them into compelling and memorable stories.’

It was worth it to attend, just to hear those words of praise for my efforts. But then I heard these words about the second prize winner:

“The idyllic country setting in this piece was very well conveyed. Even as a city boy, I could easily picture the rolling fields; in fact, I felt like I was there.’

Hmm. My entry was set in the country…

‘This story packs an emotional punch rendered more potent in this writer’s hands. You enter this story effortlessly and don’t realize how invested you are until your heart lurches in final lines. It takes a skilled hand to draw a reader in without them really noticing.’

Oh, how I hoped – I dared hope – Terry’s words were about my story.

‘If you’re a parent, you may read this through different eyes, and feel the climax a little longer.”

Indeed, my story – “Zogler from Levitron” – was Amprosia’s second prize winner! Hurray!

There’s nothing quite like feedback from a writer of Terry Fallis’s stature to send a writer back to work with a renewed sense of energy and purpose. I may just finish this collection by the end of this year! And if not, well, maybe I’ll be entering next year’s Amprosia contest, too.

Please wish me luck, and if you’ve got a project on the go, I wish you all the best with it too.

By the way, the visual for this post is the cover of the anthology this year’s finalists will appear in, once the text “Edited by Heather M. O’Connor” has been put in place.

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Categories : Writing
Tags : short story, writing short stories

Writing Picture Books

By Kathy · Comments (0)
Wednesday, March 13th, 2013

Writing Picture Books: What Works and What Doesn’t Need help with your picture book manuscript?

From the introduction to the updated e-book version of Writing Picture Books: What Works & What Doesn’t:

Many books aim to help writers write better books, but not many with the specific purpose of helping writers write better picture books. Why is this?

Because writing picture books is too easy for anyone to need help doing it?

Because what makes a picture book successful is its pictures?

Because what makes a picture book appeal to readers is too elusive to grasp?

Anyone who has tried writing a picture book, and with a vague sense of dissatisfaction with the result relegated it to the bottom of a drawer, knows that writing a picture book is not easy. Anyone who, with confidence and high hopes, has sent a picture book manuscript to a publisher, only to see it returned with a form letter saying, ‘Thanks, but no thanks’ knows it, too. Anyone with a collection of such manuscripts and rejection letters certainly knows that writing a picture book is not easy.

Writing any book is not easy, but picture books present unique challenges that make the task more difficult than most people expect, given how short and apparently simple they are.

Just what are the challenges? How can you successfully meet them? Order the book now for less than you may have spent submitting (unsuccessfully) your picture book manuscript.

C$6.99

To complete your purchase, click on the Shopping Bag that will appear in the lower right corner of your screen. Tax will be added once you have entered your payment information. The PDF file will be delivered to your inbox shortly.

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Categories : Kathy Stinson Books, Writing
Tags : books about writing, resources for writers, writing children's books

Our 7th Seaside Workshop/Retreat

By Kathy · Comments (0)
Wednesday, February 6th, 2013

Word is spreading across the country that the place to be in September is at the Seaside Workshop/Retreat that Peter Carver and I have been offering for several years now. Thanks to all participants who have shared their enthusiasm for the experience.

Port Joli, Nova Scotia

We offer time to write free of interruptions, feedback on your current writing project, and opportunities for solitude and hanging out with fellow writers. All in a beautiful setting on the south shore of Nova Scotia.

We are now accepting applications. Deadline April 30, 2013.

Want to know more?

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Categories : Professional Development, Retreat, Workshop, Writing
Tags : Nova Scotia, Nova Scotia Writing Workshop, Peter Carver, support for writers, writing retreat, writing workshops

Writers’ Blogs I Like Reading

By Kathy · Comments (2)
Wednesday, January 23rd, 2013

girl reading blogs Sometimes after a lengthy interruption to one’s writing life, it’s hard to get back in the groove. Whether time away from a project is for holiday celebrations, vacation, tending to the needs of family or friends, or for work that’s sure to put bread on the table next month, there’s an inevitable break in any momentum one has managed to build. Crazy as it seems, it can actually be scary to open up that file that will invite your characters (if you’re writing fiction) or your subject (if you’re writing non-fiction) back into your life again. (“If you’re writing”, I say, but if you’re like me, after a lengthy interruption, you’re not writing. You’re doing just about anything to avoid it.)

To nudge myself gently toward the task that I know will engage and even engross me once I’m back at it, I will sometimes read blogs of other writers. It sort of feels like I’m working, it sometimes gives me a practical tip or two, but often it just helps me find that part of my brain that remembers I am a writer. No, I’m not so far gone that I actually forget that, but after time away from my writing, I don’t feel much like one.

Some blogs I like to visit are friends’ blogs: www.erinthomas.com and www.lenacoakley.com, for example. Both of them have links to other blogs that I also visit from time to time.

Sometimes I visit the blogs of writers whose work I’ve been editing: like www.tudorrobins.ca (Tudor’s first novel, Objects in Mirror, will be published this spring.)

During our email chats about her manuscript, Tudor put me onto another blog that has become one of my favourites: www.kaykenyon.com.

Reading other people’s blogs isn’t writing. It won’t get that story or that non-fiction book written. Only writing will do that. But it’s a painless and often effective way of easing back into writing. What writers’ blogs do you like to read when you need help easing back into your own work so you can once again feel like a legitimate member of the writing community?

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Categories : Blogging, Reading, Writing
Tags : resources for writers

A Plug for CANSCAIP

By Kathy · Comments (0)
Wednesday, January 9th, 2013

CANSCAIP logo If you enjoyed any of the instalments of “An Intimate Examination of Sock Fluff” posted over the past 14 months and would like to read it in its entirety, you can find all the pieces of it by selecting Speeches in the Blog Categories or by entering Sock Fluff (or even just ‘fluff’) in the Search box.

It was great fun writing and delivering that keynote for CANSCAIP’s Packaging Your Imagination conference in 2011. Richard Scrimger delivered the keynote in 2012 and his brilliant meditation on what writing is will appear in the upcoming newsletter, which is sent to all Members and Friends. (Yes, CANSCAIP had Friends before Mark Zuckerberg was even born. He’ll be 29 this year. CANSCAIP will be 35. And watch for the announcement of PYI speakers for 2013 in an upcoming newsletter too.)

Next week, to help celebrate the organization’s 35th anniversary, I will begin my term as CANSCAIP’s Writer-in-Residence. The position is officially called ‘Creator-in-Residence’ and there are actually two of us. While I’m mentoring writers through manuscript evaluations, Dianna Bonder will be mentoring illustrators through portfolio submissions. And both of us will be writing articles that will be published in CANSCAIP newsletters in the coming months.

If you are a professional writer or illustrator and aren’t already a member, or if you aspire to be one or the other or both, or if you just like kids’ books and would like to support their creators’ organization while getting insights into that world, I urge you to join CANSCAIP.

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Categories : Writing
Tags : Canadian writers, resources for writers

“An Intimate Examination of Sock Fluff”
Part 14

By Kathy · Comments (0)
Wednesday, January 2nd, 2013

The last excerpt from my PYI keynote in a series that started in December 2011…

driving at night

I rather like it that the last installment of this ‘spectacular’ and ‘inspiring’ Packaging Your Imagination’ keynote is landing at the start of the new year. I hope it will inspire you in whatever your undertakings may be this year…

When Karen called me last week, about today, she asked of me only that I “be inspiring”. My first thought was to share with you one of my favourite quotes about writing, one that I go back to time and again, when the rough and tumble of the writing life tosses all my sock fluff and whatever fluff I might be writing together in one dull, grey lump in the lint trap of my heart.

This is E.L. Doctorow. He speaks of writing a novel, but what he says applies to lots of life.

Writing a novel is like driving a car at night. You can’t see any farther ahead than your headlights shine, but you can make the whole trip that way.

What Doctorow says reassures me that indeed I can keep on with this troublesome project, I can go on with whatever challenging journey I happen to be on, if today, I don’t worry about what might be beyond where my headlights are shining.

The morning after Karen called me about taking on today’s keynote, I woke in the wee hours with another idea – about the inspiring nature of Sock Fluff. I got up and made some notes, then, at 6:30 or so, I went back to bed with a cup of tea, to read a chapter of the book I was caught up in then.

Here is one paragraph of that chapter. This is narrator Marion Stone, telling readers about another road. It’s the kind of prose that, for me, begs to be read aloud.

I pushed out the wooden shutters of my bedroom window and climbed onto the ledge. Sunshine flooded the room. By noon the temperature would reach seventy-five degrees, but for the moment I shivered in my bare feet. From my perch, I could see beyond Missing’s east wall onto a quiet meandering road which descended and then disappeared, the hills rising just beyond, as if the road had gone underground before it emerged in the distance as a mere thread. It wasn’t a road we traveled or even one that I knew how to get to, and yet it was a view I felt I owned. On the left side, a fortresslike wall flanked the road, receding with it, struggling to stay vertical. Giant clusters of bougainvillea spilled over, brushing the white shamas of the few pedestrians. There was a quality to this pellucid first light and the vivid colors that made it impossible to imagine trouble.

If you’ve read Cutting for Stone by Abraham Verghese, you know that the road will feature in Marion’s life again later in the story. Even if you haven’t, you can probably guess that it will, because of the weight he gives it in his description. And as you can likely guess, there will be trouble. Amazon.ca affiliate link

I read that paragraph from Chapter 23 of the book and I came to this thought:

There is nothing more inspiring, if you’re an artist – or more instructive – than exposure to the work of other artists. It’s not a very playful thought. Besides, just as I love symmetry on my odometer, so I do, to some extent, in my writing, whether a picture book story, a biography, a short story or novel-length work of fiction – or a speech. So, let’s get back to where we began.

I doubt there’s another poem about sock fluff to be found anywhere, but surely we can get back to where sock fluff is most often found? Indeed. Another of my childhood favourites fits the bill perfectly.  And so, to close, “Mud” by Polly Chase Boyden:

mud poem

Thanks, everyone, for hanging in for my Intimate Examination of Sock Fluff.

Photo: The road down Saxa Vord at night (Mike Pennington) / CC BY-SA 2.0

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Categories : Speeches, Writing
Tags : creativity, inspiration, poetry
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