Sometimes a sentence flows to paper or screen on a writer’s first approach. Other times it takes editing to get the tone and intended impact just right. During online photography classes with Joy Sussman, I’ve been learning that this can also be true of photographs.
Here is an early version and final version of the last sentence of my coming-in-March picture book, Harry and Walter.
— Harry took Walter’s hand and off they went.
–Harry took Walter’s hand because some things don’t change.
And off they went — the best of friends.
And here’s a photography class assignment, before and after editing.
Which do I like editing more? Text or photos? Hard to say, they can both feel like magic sometimes, but for sure I’ll be doing plenty of text editing in March. (More on that next week.)